viernes, 13 de febrero de 2015

THERAPIES


maybe because of decorating of  the swiming pool, they are in a beutifull pool for girls, it is small there are only two persons and they are helping a girl, the woman who takes the girl´s legs seems making exercises to her in the water like a therapy, it could be that the girl can´t walk, she´s a parlytic person, she must be happy because she has a inner faith that she´ll walk again, and at the same time sometimes she must be sad because she feels, she makes  a redundant efforts but there´s a fury inside of her that obligates  to keep doing the therapies.

1 comentario:

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